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Feedback appreciated.
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Edit 1:
*Changed header highlight, darkened emblem/logo.

Edit 2:
*Changed background color, added slight shadow.

Edit 3:
*Tweaked header image color, added slight bold-effect to the pseudo-Title

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:iconkytjunon:
Contrast is good. the interface is not hard on the eyes at all. Not being a good webpage designer, I can't really give much critique. But I like it. It's eye catching and quite easy to look at.

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:iconbritanniawd:
Really like it, man, it's one of your best yet. The only things I feel need fixing are the navigation bar, that I feel is a little too dark to read (unless it changes colour / lights up when the mouse is over it), and that the chat-box could be made square to match the main 'Follow Up' text area and statistics box.

Other than that, I feel the title/logo area should also be made a little brighter. Seeing as both it, and the navbar are the areas the user is most likely going to click to go around the site, I think that if you made them a little more visible/readable, it would make the site far more user friendly.

That's all. - K
:iconarmannobariart:
Thanks for the critique.

Yes, the navbar is intended to light up a good 30% when mouse-overed.

I updated the deviation with a brighter top area and logo space now. Mind you, the center logo, the Title/Subtitle area, etc.. are just placeholders. I did, however, make the emblem I used a lot bolder.

I've also squared-up the Chatbox.

What do you think of it now?
:iconarmannobariart:
Haha, thanks for the words, mate.
What do you think of the updated version?
:iconkytjunon:
The image in the background is quite intriguing. you're own?

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Anything can be art, even a fox in a Jedi robe...
My gallery is always open [link]
Comments are more than welcome
:iconarmannobariart:
The buildings on the background for "Moving Day"? Yeah, it's my own creation. On my Tyne2010 account a piece called "Zombie Sunrise". Submitted it like a year ago lol
"Moving Day" and all the info I wrote about it was made just for this design. It's all fake.. I like the name though haha
:iconbritanniawd:
Yeah, much better!
Really user friendly now.

- K
:iconkytjunon:
The name is pretty cool. Still it's a nice design. good work :#1:

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Anything can be art, even a fox in a Jedi robe...
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